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Rich countries should not employ skilled people from poor countries, as poor countries need the worker more.do you agree or disagree?

Developing societies should refrain from acquiring intellectual individuals from developing states since these
nations
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 will need the labour the most. I agree with the statement that
workers
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 should be left alone to
work
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 in their
countries
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 and I will delve into it with examples in
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 essay. Employing teams from poor
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 by wealthy
countries
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 will bring about a brain drain in these underdeveloped
nations
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 since all their trained skilled workforce will have to leave their jobs here to
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 in rich communities . There's no problem about these
workers
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 seeking greener pastures in rich
countries
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 like America, Canada, Germany etc but they should consider the damage
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 will cause though it is a great opportunity for them.
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, the less developed
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 will need
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 labour pool the most to manage and
work
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 in the country to boost the economy.
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, some African land are suffering economic hardships
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 capacity since their train
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 are employed by foreign governments and
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 is destroying their jobs as there are no qualified individuals in different fields to
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.
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, when
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 skilled
workers
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 leave it reduces the productivity of the poor country because those that have the means to
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 are employed in different developed states.
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, they will have to train more
workers
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 to reduce those who have travelled. A survey was made on the economic situation of southern China and it was revealed that the young
workers
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 were employed in more advanced industries in the region so productivity is lower since those left are the aged people who cannot
work
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.
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, these
countries
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 can help train the workforce of developing
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 and build businesses to boost their productivity. In conclusion, the employment of skilled professionals by wealthy communities from developing
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 will cause a brain drain and reduce production in those states. I agree with the statement that when
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 happens the poor government loses a great labor pool and causes economic damage.

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