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Below is a chart showing how many hours per week the average person spent on various kinds of media, including watching TV, surfing on the Internet, listening to the radio, and reading printed material. The years covered are from 1990 to 2005. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.

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Different types of
media
consumption
 show a different trend that can be seen by the number of hours spent by the average person.
While
 Television and Printed Material as
media
 show a downward trend, Internet and Radio
consumption
 duration are going upward.
This
 shows how people prefer to spend more time perceiving information from the latter group of
media
 types. Having the highest rise in the graph, the Internet is more widely and longer to be consumed potentially because of how many options and services
that
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apply
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it covers. It offers alternatives for Television and Printed Material in
form
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the form
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 of video streaming services and online magazines. The alternatives are what may potentially
causes
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 the rise of the Internet and the fall of Television and Printed Material.
While
 for Radio, people still use them to listen to music and news
while
 they are stuck in a traffic jam which is becoming more severe over time.
This
 may still keep the average
media
 type
consumption
 number to still rise by a little.
To conclude
, what may help to support the average
media
consumption
 rate for any
media
 type is the versatility of the options offered and how convenient can it be listened or watched to
while
 doing other activities.
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