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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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These given maps represent
the
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Grange
Park
 which is provided for public use in two different eras. The first figure dates back to
the
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1920 and the second one was made in the present year.
Overall
,
this
park
 has been some dramatic changes throughout the mentioned time period. During
this
 time frame, some structures
such
 as
pond
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 for water plants have been demolished and some buildings have recently been built.
Additionally
, some places
such
 as the stage for musicians have been renovated and expanded after 1920. From the first year of the second decade of twenty century to the current time, the central fountain and pond for water plants have been entirely removed, afterwards, the central Rose Garden, the café and the playground area have been constructed
instead
 of those man-made structures respectively. The glass house that was located in the southeast of the
park
 region was pulled down and converted into an artificial water stream.
Furthermore
, it can be observed that the small stage has been renovated and
also
 expanded and transformed into a large Amphitheatre for holding a wide range of musical affairs.
Moreover
, maybe for solving the traffic problems in different streets that the
park
 is surrounded by them and
also
 people who come to
this
park
by
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 their cars and they look for a parking place, a car
park
 has been added to the underground area of
this
 governmental entertainment complex.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Amphitheater
  • Landscaping
  • Recreational facilities
  • Grassy areas
  • Flowerbeds
  • Pathways
  • Seating areas
  • Modern amenities
  • Children’s play area
  • Accessibility
  • Environmental impact
  • Social impact
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