The graph below gives information about the total oil use of 4 major consumers from 2009 to 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph indicates the
oil
consumption
of four regions from 2009 to 2030. The daily oil
use is measured in millions of barrels
. In general, the US has been the leading oil
consumer since 2009 and is anticipated to remain on top until 2030. Meanwhile, the daily oil
usage
of both China
and the Middle East is predicted to have an inversely proportional pattern with Western Europe and Japan over the given 21 years. In detail, the US's oil
consumption
initially
was almost 10 million
barrels
per day
which remained consistent until 2015. Oppositely, the Middle East and China
were both the least oil
users in 2009 in as much as half of Western Europe’s and Japan’s in the same year. In contrast
, oil
consumption
in China
levelled with Western Europe and Japan in 2015 as the latter dipped to approximately 3 million
from 4 million
barrels
per day
after 6 years. In the upcoming years, the daily oil
usage
of the US is projected to gradually decline by 6 million
barrels
in 2030. Similarly
, Western Europe and Japan’s consumption
is likely to further
decrease to 2 million
barrels
per day
towards the final year. In addition
, China
's usage
of oil
each day
is expected to peak in 2025 at roughly 4 million
barrels
and by 2030 it is predicted to become equal with the Middle East at an estimated third of the US's oil
usage
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