Your Australian friend is thinking about making a short visit to your country, and intends to visit a particular tourist attraction during his/her stay. However, you feel that it would be better for your friend to visit a different tourist attraction. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter recommend a good time for your friend to visit your country say why it would be better to visit a different tourist attraction suggest that you and your friend meet

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Dear Mark, I am writing

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letter to you regarding your planned

visit

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to Elephanta

caves

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near Mumbai during the monsoon between June to September. I would like to advise you

that is

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not a good time to

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India. As monsoon hits India many cities are waterlogged and don't have proper sanitation systems.It aggravates the problem and cities have flood-like situations during that time.so I recommend you arrange your

visit

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from October to February to

visit

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Elephanta

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I like to inform you that a particular tourist spot has no facilities to stay there. ,

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there is no proper seating arrangement available there. It is situated on an island .

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of ,that we can plan for Ajanta and Ellora

caves

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which are 430km away from Mumbai. these

caves

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are UNESCO heritage. There are a number of facilities available for tourists to relax . So , I propose you

visit

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Ajanta and Ellora

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during winter.you can book your tickets to Mumbai and stay at my place .

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we will go there by car. I am looking for an early response. All the best, Jeff

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

188 words

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