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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts illustrate different
age
 groups of the community of Yemenis and Italians throughout the
period
 between 2000 and 2050, respectively.
Overall
, Yemen and Italy will experience enormous changes in population in the future. Even though
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Yemen’s middle
age
group
 is predicted to follow a significant rise, the percentage of its youngest category is expected to fall in the same
period
.
Nevertheless
, the situation in Italy differs a lot. The
group
 of adults and youngest will fall slightly,
whereas
 the oldest
age
group
 is estimated to have a major increase. In terms of Yemen, the 65+ population is predicted to escalate minimally from 3.6 per
cent
 in 2000 to 5.7 per
cent
 in 2050.
Furthermore
, 15-59-year-old people are envisioned to follow an upward trend, which is anticipated to increase from 46.3
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 in 2000 to 57.3
percent
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 in 2050.
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The percentage
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 of the youngest
age
group
 will decrease gradually from 50.1 per
cent
 to 37 per
cent
 in
this
period
.
According to
 the graph, the mature
adult’s
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 population is expected to experience
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growth considerably, rising from 24.1 per
cent
 to 42.3 per
cent
. Meanwhile, the other two categories will fall substantially during the
period
 of 50 years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, period, group, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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