The chart below compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The chart below compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The chart illustrates
what
Correct word choice
that
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number
Correct article usage
the number
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of individuals per
household
has changed over the period of 20 years in the country UK.
Overall
, there used to be more
number of
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apply
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individuals who used to live in a single
household
compared to the next 20
years
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years'
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data. In 1981,
The
Correct article usage
apply
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people
used to live more together in a
household
compared to a
single person
Add a hyphen
single-person
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household
. Relatively it could be the reason
of
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for
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having a joint family in 1981. In a
household
there used to be 6
people
which has
substancially
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substantially
fallen down and in 2001 it has dropped to two households who are living with more than 6
people
. When
looked
Wrong verb form
looking
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at the
two person
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two-person
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household
there can be
a
Correct article usage
apply
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merely different
numbers
Correct the article-noun agreement
number
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but they are yet almost the same. What immense change could be seen is in the single person
household
where in 1981 it used to be 17 households and in 2001 it has immensely increased to 26 households.
Due to
inflation and other interpersonal relationship
problem
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problems
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people
in 2001
has
Unnecessary verb
apply
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preferred to live
to
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apply
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alone compared to the past 20
years
Change noun form
years'
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record.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words household, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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