The chart below compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The chart illustrates
what
Correct word choice
that
number
of individuals per Correct article usage
the number
household
has changed over the period of 20 years in the country UK. Overall
, there used to be more number of
individuals who used to live in a single Correct quantifier usage
apply
household
compared to the next 20 years
data.
In 1981, Change noun form
years'
The
Correct article usage
apply
people
used to live more together in a household
compared to a single person
Add a hyphen
single-person
household
. Relatively it could be the reason of
having a joint family in 1981. In a Change preposition
for
household
there used to be 6 people
which has substancially
fallen down and in 2001 it has dropped to two households who are living with more than 6 Correct your spelling
substantially
people
.
When looked
at the Wrong verb form
looking
two person
Add a hyphen
two-person
household
there can be a
merely different Correct article usage
apply
numbers
but they are yet almost the same. What immense change could be seen is in the single person Correct the article-noun agreement
number
household
where in 1981 it used to be 17 households and in 2001 it has immensely increased to 26 households. Due to
inflation and other interpersonal relationship problem
Fix the agreement mistake
problems
people
in 2001 has
preferred to live Unnecessary verb
apply
to
alone compared to the past 20 Change preposition
apply
years
record.Change noun form
years'
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Vocabulary: Replace the words household, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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