Exposure to international media, such as films, TV and magazines, has an impact on the local culture. What do you think of these impacts? Do you think that the advantages of these impacts outweigh the disadvantages?

In the twenty-first century, it is easy to take a reference from global media
due to
their exponential reach. For that reason, some local people feel that these
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many pros.
While
others believe that it can have many hidden cons as well.
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the disadvantages with reasons and examples. On the one end, in recent years,
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western
culture
has affected our local
culture
in many negative ways via various global media platforms like television, films and journals.
Firstly
, the living relationship
culture
has been adopted in India which
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originated in aboard countries.
Secondly
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to
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drugs and wines
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also
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from global countries. In India,
for instance
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wine usage is constantly increasing among teenagers in
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5 years.
Hence
, it could have
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effect. On the other end, despite
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many cons, there are various unavoidable pros. One would be how youngsters can build and grow their
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startups
by learning from international TV shows. The Shark Tank India,
for instance
, is
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TV show which has been cloned from the USA version, and that helped thousands of Indian
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entrepreneurs
to build their businesses. Other
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many Indian film directors
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adopted
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techniques and tricks to build local action movies,
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leads to many successes for them. The Krish movie,
for example
, is been one of the best action movies by an Indian which has adopted the
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style.
Thus
, these benefits would not only grow the local
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youngsters
but
also
can increase
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employment dramatically as more great
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movies
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built
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locally.
To conclude
, there is
undoutably
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undoubtedly
a few demerits of adopting global
culture
via different international media platforms.
However
, the merits
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considerably more benefits for any country and their local
culture
. In my perspective,
therefore
, the
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advantages
outweigh the disadvantages.
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