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The charts below show the number of registered road vehicles in use in a European country in 1996 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

The charts below show the number of registered road vehicles in use in a European country in 1996 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
The bar chart illustrates how many registered vehicles in the country at
European
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 from 1996 to 2006
It is clear that
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 the number of private cars in
European
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 was the highest. Meanwhile, the opposite was true for the bus In 1996, there were 19
million
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 private cars, which was hit the highest point in
European
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.
While
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 the number of buses registered vehicles
be
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is
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 lowest at 0.1
million
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. The figure for other types and lorries, motorcycles were 1,2 and 0,5 and 1,0
million
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 respectively In 2006. The number of private cars in
European
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 still was highest at 24
million
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 and the bus was the lowest at 0,1
million
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. At the same time, there were 0,6
million
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 motorcycles registered which was highest than lorries about 0,2
million
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. The figure for other types was 1,9
million
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words european, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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