The graph provides information on developments in national access to modern technologies in the UK from 1996 to 2003.

The graph provides information on developments in national access to modern technologies in the UK from 1996 to 2003.
The graph provides information on developments in national access to modern technologies in the
UK
from 1996 to 2003. In the
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you can see that all the trends have increased, but each has its own growth trend. In 1996-97, mobile phones had the lowest percentage, about 19%.
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compared
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with about 28% in the
home
PC and approximately 60% in the CD player. In 1998-99, the rarest of modern technologies was Internet access, which was about 10%. the penetration of mobile
phone
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also
increased by about 9%, from 19% to 28%.
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computer availability
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gradually increased to about 38%, making it the second most accessible in 1998-1999. The most used and at the same time accessible technology was
CD
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player reached a mark under 70% of the
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increased by about 10% since 1996. Until 2002-3 years, mobile
phone
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phones
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available in the
UK
has grown significantly and took second place ahead of
home
computers by about 10% and reaching about 70%. From 1996-97 until 2002-3, the CD player did not surrender the leading position and achieved more than 80%. Since 1998-99, Internet access has increased more than four times: from about 10% to about 45% but ranked
last
among modern technology in the
UK
.
Home
computer availability in homes in the
UK
has been consistently rising but failed to reach 60% by 2002-3.
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