The charts below show the percentage of male and female worker in country A and country B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given pie charts illustrate the proportions of workers in terms of their fields based on gender in two countries, A and B. From an

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perspective, it is evident that the proportions of Service were highest regardless of gender,

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reverse data could be observed in the figures for the industrial field with country A and Agriculture with country B. In nation A, the percentage of male and female workers in Services was highest, at 56% and 49%, correspondingly. The figures for man and woman working in Agriculture is lower, at 29% and 43%, correspondingly.

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, Industry accounted for the lowest proportion, at 15% for men and 8% for women in

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nation. In nation B, the percentages of male and female workers from Services were peak at 65% and 49%, respectively,

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there was a fall of 32% and 11%, respectively, in the Industrial field.

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, the data on men and women working in Agriculture witnessed a lowest to just 3% and 1%, respectively, in the same country.

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