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With the development of modern transportation comes environmental problems. What possible solutions are there to these problems?

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Environmental issues are coming because of the development of modern transportation. There are several solutions to these
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such
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 as using electric
cars
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 and the government has to educate society about these
problems
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. In
this
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 essay, I will talk about these solutions.
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,
people
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 can make use of electric
cars
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 more rather than gas
cars
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.
This
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 change will significantly decrease air pollution because electric
cars
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 do not produce carbon dioxide emissions.
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, Tesla is one of the most popular car companies that are manufacturing electric automobiles but
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 the high prices not a lot of individuals can purchase them, which enables
people
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 to buy gas
cars
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 because they do not have other options.
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, if these
cars
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 will become more affordable more
people
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 going to buy them and it will help the environment.
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, the government should spread awareness about the harm that transportation causes to the environment. Many
people
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 just do not know a lot about it
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 the lack of information.
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, the majority of
people
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 in society are not aware of those
problems
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 because the government chooses to put its attention to other topics, and
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 one they just avoid or say something little about it, that just confuses individuals because they do not understand what it means. In conclusion, I think that to solve these environmental
problems
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 that
people
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 are facing today because of transportation,
people
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 need to try to use more electric
cars
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 if they have enough money for that, and authorities must rise awareness about these topics which will lead to a more conscious society.

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