In many countries children are engaged in some kind od paid work, some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.

Child

labour is a controversial topic

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nowadays

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because

it has some particular positive impacts and detrimental effects.

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, some group of individuals argue that

child

employment is totally harmful for

thier

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their

further

education

while

opponents state that it gain beneficial

job

experience and they perceive a liability of occupation at

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age

. I stand for the latter approach.

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essay will explore both views and state my own opinion about

this

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circumstances. On the one hand, when kids

involve

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in various types of

employments

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at

their

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young

age

, they lost their

valuble

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valuable

childhood.

Nevertheless

, they couldn'

t

go back to that

time

.

In addition

, young students don'

t

pay more attention

for

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their academics when they are doing

part

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part-time

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time

or

full

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time

job

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. They couldn'

t

invest enough

time

for

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their studies.

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,

children

abondon

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abandon

from

schools

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becouse

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because

they tend to earn lots of money since childhood.

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, most

of

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employees

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the employees

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attempt to take

difficult

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work from toddlers without paying

a

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adaquate

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adequate

salary.

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, the

department

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of

education

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in

UK

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the UK

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pointed out from their research that as students involve

numerous

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occupations at

the

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young

age

, they couldn'

t

get higher

score

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from

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the examinations

which

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hold by schools and governments. Not only that but

also

they are unable to contest in

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world

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because

of

this

reason.

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, after considering

this

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all facts, my opinion is that we should let them for doing work with balancing their studies and

partime

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part-time

jobs.

On the other hand

, some experts in our society evaluate

child

employers

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because

they consider that it is a

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great

opportunity to improve

job

skills.

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, It

affect

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to enhance a person's character and personality for

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to

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the

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future career.

Moreover

, If toddlers join any kind of employment, they could learn

real

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term

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of work and workflow.

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, they will become

a

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independent individual and

fianancialy

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financially

financial

stable person at

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age

without

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support

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their

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parents.

In addition

,

children

, who are doing in

job

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the job

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, occur a

responsibilty

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responsibility

regarding their occupation. It will influence

for

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their upcoming career.

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, the

explortion

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exploration

, which have done by

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of London in

past

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decade, found that former working

children

will become

a

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notable

entreprenears

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entrepreneurs

entrepreneur

in future. Not only that but

also

they will

familiar

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for

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with

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the upcoming working methods.

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this

argument

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because

all reasons positively affect

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the advancement of

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the child

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child

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. In conclusion,

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essay mostly

support

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the idea that

child

employment

have

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number

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of benefits.

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it has some unfavourable

aspect

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,

but

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my opinion is that we should let them

for

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follow

this

growing trend.

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, I

recomend

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recommend

that government should take

a

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responsibilty

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responsibility

about

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the protection of

child

labours

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and parents have a liability to show accurate ways to build up

children's

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their children's

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future life.