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Band 3.5

write about the advantages snd disadvantages of studying abroad.

Studying is essential for everyone
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 because it helps us to gain knowledge.
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Moreover
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 it prepares us for the real world.
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 many people think studying is the most boring thing in the world, it is necessary for our survival. These days, more and more students are interested in studying abroad. I think studying overseas has both pros and cons.
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 , I want to talk about its positive sides. I can tell a lot about
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, it is an opportunity to see some places in real life.
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, when you graduate from university, you will get a good job with a decent salary.
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, you can make new friends in
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 country you are studying.
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, my friends who are studying in different countries say that it has a lot of drawbacks. You spend a lot of money on everything including food, clothes, rent and so on. You are alone,so you have to take care of yourself, do the cooking, washing up,
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 for yourself.
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 that you feel homesick. You cannot see friends and family for a
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, despite all its cons studying abroad is a great thing if you want a better and brighter future.

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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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