Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools . others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Dicuss both view views and give your own opinion.

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in the same institution for

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and schoolgirls is a controversial topic among people. Some minds claim that for a better

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, it is good if

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young men and women attend different schools

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others oppose

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viewpoint. From my perspective, co-schooling is the best thing for the betterment of everyone. On the one hand, get

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study in

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academy,

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genders feel independent where they can express their feelings and ideas without worrying to hurt others. To illustrate, if girls and

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are studying together and sometimes they have to discuss something

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as puberty or any other subject but they can't express themselves in front of

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/girls

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gender reasons, it means it is perfect for them to study in dividing schools.

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, they don't have to be so sensitive about their physical appearance.

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, some girls get special and ready to look more attractive and

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do the same too.

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, studying in the same schools or colleges makes the same as gender equality which leads to a better place to live for all which leads to the positive development of the nation. In

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new era, women and men are working together for the growth of the country so they have equal rights at work, study or any other areas.

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, in the workplace or any other area, growth is only possible, if they respect each other. By having mixed

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, they can learn a lot about themselves by sharing their feelings and viewpoint.

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, it is the way for the positive development of the country.

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, there are reasons for taking

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in varying organizations for

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genders,

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, I personally believe that the nation can develop only if the thinking of

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genders contributes equally which is possible by starting from co-

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

311 words

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools . others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Dicuss both view views and give your own opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Nowadays people believe that governments should invest tax payers money in healthcare, others believe that money should be use in other areas. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

One of your friends invited you for a meal with his/ her family in their home. Write a letter to your friend Thank him and tell them what you have enjoyed the most How do you feel about his/her family Suggest him/her to visit you

The government should control the Internet to reduce cyber crime and ensure safety of users. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Wriggling critters armed with enzymes can break down plastics that would otherwise take decades, or even centuries to degrade.