You recently ate at a local restaurant with your family and want to write to the local newspaper to tell them About the restaurant What you ate Why you would / would not recommend this restaurant

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Dear Editor, I hope you are doing well. Please allow me to introduce myself. My name is Kiran Singh and I am a professional food critic. Recently, my family and I happened to visit a

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named "Farm House" in the neighbourhood and I am writing to share my feedback on the

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. My family and I had dinner at the

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"Farm House" and I must say that we were impressed with the ambience. The staffs at the

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were very welcoming and made us feel comfortable. We ordered spinach dip, french fries and onion rings for appetizers and they exceeded our expectations. Food was served hot with the right dips and they were generous when we asked for extra dips. For the main course, we had chicken fried rice, ribs and a chicken burger. The ribs were a perfect medium rare and fried rice was absolutely delicious. The chicken patty in the burger was cooked at the right temperature and had a crispiness to it.

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, we had a great experience with the food. One thing that could have been better is the wait time. We had to wait before we got our main course. If the service could have been faster, it would have been a 10/10 experience. I would recommend "Farm House" to anyone who would like to have a good

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experience. Regards, Kiran

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

229 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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