Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you disagree or disagree?
Nowadays there are
health
problems that many manufactured food
and drink products
consist of high levels of sugar
. I agree that to reduce sugar
consumption, sugar
should be sold sugar
higher Change preposition
at sugar
price
.
To begin
with ,it is true that the consumption of sugar
can cause a range of health
problems.People
should perceive that taking manufactured food
and drink contain high levels of sugar
. It leads adversely affect
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affects
to
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apply
people
. However
sugary products
are inexpensive to buy. For example
, when we purchase at a fast food
restaurant, they promote a cheaper price
It promotes cheaper price
to buy drinks. It leads Fix the agreement mistake
prices
people
to buy manufactured drinks more easily. If the government decide to impose a higher tax on sugary foods it increase
the Change the verb form
increases
price
of the product. As a result
, these manufactured goods will be less popular among people
.
In addition
, increasing the cost of unhealthy foods,
will affect to company’s profits. As the Remove the comma
apply
price
tag increases, it leads the problems for the company in less profit. According to
this
, the company should make products
with less amount of sugar
. For instance
, the company has recently invented manufactured less amount of sugar
however
the taste is similar to high levels of sugar
. As a result
, unhealthy food
is replaced by healthy food
.
In conclusion, higher sugar
products
are affect
increasingly Change the verb form
are affected
health
issues. One of the main solutions to
tag a higher tax on these unhealthy foods. And Add a missing verb
is to
also
it encourages companies to produce healthy food
replaced by unhealthy manufactured items. Furthermore
, people
can choose alternative products
and companies to reduce higher sugar
. It leads people
to reduce their sugar
intake and it improves people
’s health
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