The maps show the improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day.

The maps show the improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day.
The illustrations present the
university
campus
which has been developed between 2010 and the present day.
Overall
, all buildings on the
campus
have been expanded. Some
facilities
have been moved to one building and replaced with other
facilities
. In 2010, there was a road passing through the
campus
, which divided the
university
offices and first
student
accommodation
at the top of the
campus
. The lake was located at the center of the
campus
surrounded by the lawn & seating area.
Next,
the Teaching block of art & science was placed at the top right of the
campus
. The shops and restaurants were located on the right side of the
campus
. The second
student
accommodation
was located at the bottom left of the
campus
. At present, the first
student
accommodation
and lake have remained at the same location, but there is one more building added on the right side of the remaining
student
accommodation
. The lawn & seating area has been removed. The
university
office has been renovated and changed from a
university
office to a science building.
Also
, the teaching block has changed into an arts building which has been taller than before the upgrade. The second
student
accommodation
has been changed into huge
student
facilities
building where the shop, restaurant, and office have moved into. The shops after moving to the
student
facilities
building have been replaced with new
student
accommodation
as well as
the restaurant which has been replaced with a new road to access the new
student
accommodation
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words university, campus, facilities, student, accommodation with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
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