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The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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A glance at the provided chart reveals the amount of money spent on travelling by the top 10 countries with the most contribution in 2014.
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, all ten countries share the same patterns. The highest proportion of the cost of travel belongs to China. Taiwan accounts for the least percentage. As can be seen in the paragraph, China make up the highest customer expenses on travel in 2014, reaching more than 100
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, the USA and Germany have similar figures, peaking at about 85
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, at over 55
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 which followed closely by the United Kingdom, Singapore was not far behind(above 25
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) There was the same number for South Korea and Hong Kong, at 20
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, next came from India, which ranged around 15
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. The amount for Taiwan was much lower, ranging between 10 and 15
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, no more than 20
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