The map shows the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two given maps describe the transformation of the small town of Stokeford from 1930 to 2010. Thoroughly, it is apparent that the farming-based small city that was full of cattle has been transformed into a housing area. Turning into detail, on the north side of the primary

school

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, the farmland placed in the east had been replaced with a housing area.

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, the shops along the

road

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had been replaced by housing areas. Meanwhile, the main

road

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was still there, with two additional three-way junctions.

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, on the north side of the primary

school

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, the bridge still remained.

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, there was no change for the post office across the

road

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while

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the primary

school

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located in front of the post office still existed with two additional buildings.

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, on the south side of the primary

school

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, the farmland located between the river Stroke and the

road

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had been converted into a residential area, and there was a new field constructed in the middle of houses.

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, the gardens and the large house situated in the

center

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of the village were developed by four houses and five retirement homes.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words school, road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

189 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

town
population
transformed
bustling
road network
residential areas
industrial sites
commercial zones
river
public transportation
infrastructure
schools
hospitals
shopping centers
educational facilities
healthcare facilities
urbanization
development

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