The chart below give information on the ages of populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

The chart below give  information on the ages of populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
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The pie charts provide information about the 3 different groups of people in two countries, namely
Yemen
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and Italy in 2000 and predictions for 2050.
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it is clear that
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the number of people who are over 60 will grow significantly,
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populations of children below 14 are predicted to experience a downward trend. Starting with looking at both countries in 2000, it is vividly seen that, the
proportions
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of adults in
Yemen
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and Italy were 46.3% and 61.6% respectively.
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, the number of youngsters was just higher
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% in
Yemen
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while
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in Italy there were approximately 14% of them among
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population.
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, the
proportions
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of elderly people were almost a quarter in Italy and considerably low in
Yemen
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, at nearly 4%. Regarding
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populations of 0-
14 year olds
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14-year-olds
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will drop dramatically in both
Yemen
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and Italy to 37% and 11,5% respectively. At the same time, the
proportions
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of 15-
59 year olds
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59-year-olds
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are predicted to rise to just above 57,3%,
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however
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in
Italy
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the statistics demonstrate that the figure will experience a sharp decrease to nearly 46% in 2050. As regards to
over 60s
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over-60s
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group, the
proportions
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would be nowhere near as high in
Yemen
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and Italy in 2050, reaching 5,% and 42,3% respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words yemen, proportions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • age demographics
  • age structure
  • population distribution
  • youthful population
  • ageing population
  • life expectancy
  • birth rate
  • demographic shift
  • population projection
  • median age
  • dependents
  • working-age population
  • elderly dependents
  • geriatric
  • fertility rate
  • migration
  • demographic trends
  • baby boomers
  • demographic dividend
  • population pyramid
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