The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

The bar chart provides

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information about the percentages of

illiteracy

rates

in the world by region and gender for the

last

year.

Overall

, Developed countries had the lowest

illiteracy

rates

in both and South Asia had the highest

illiteracy

rates

. In All the Regions Mentioned in the Graph Men had Some Fluctuations in

illiteracy

percentage

whereas

Women in the regions had

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upward trend for

illiteracy

rate. Looking at the Graph

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shows that the developed countries had the lowest

illiteracy

rates

with both

male

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and

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being around 2%. Male

rates

were %10 and female

rates

were %12 in Latin America and the Caribbean, respectively. The highest female

illiteracy

rates

were recorded in South Asia, Arab states and Sub-Saharan Africa with

rates

at %55, %52 and %49 respectively.

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the highest male

illiteracy

rates

were recorded in the same 3 countries with Arab states being the lowest with around %28.

On the other hand

, in East Asia and Oceania the male

illiteracy

rate was around %9

while

, the

rates

of women were %20.