The chart below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the
number
of
movies
which were produced by some different countries ("A","B","C","D",
"E"
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and "E"
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) from 2007 to 2009.
overall
, “A” produced the most
number
of
films
.
However
, “C”, “D”, and “E” had the least proportion. In 2007 and 2008, “A” produced more than 80
films
that
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produced 30
movies
more than “B”. In 2009, there was a slight decrease in the
number
of
movies
for “A”, and reached
at
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80. But, for “B”there was a sharp increase
for
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producing
movies
and “B” reached its peak at 70
movies
. For other countries, the trend of producing
films
for “C” and “E” was upward. For “C” it started under 10
films
and after two years doubled it and reached under 20
movies
.
Also
, the
number
of
movies
for “E” was about 10 and in 2009 reached about 12movies, which was a gradual increase. For “D” there was a fluctuation trend. In 2007, “D” produced about 13
movies
after one year, reaching the bottom under 10
films
, and in 2009 reached over 10
movies
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, movies, films with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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