The pie charts below show the number of native speakers of different languages in Canada in 1996, 2006, and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The below-given graphs indicate the percentages of local

speakers

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of a number of languages in Canada in three different years.

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glancing at the charts, it is evident that the majority of the people were

English

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speakers

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in all the three different

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. In the year 1996, 60% of the folks used to speak

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English

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language

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23% were French

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and 17% spoke other languages. In 2006,

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users decreased by 2%

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, there was an elevation of 3% in the people who used other unofficial languages.

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, there was a reduction in the amount of

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French

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native

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by only 1%. In the year 2016, citizens who spoke

English

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covered 57% of Canada and were followed by non-official language users. Folks who were French

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were about 21%.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

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The pie charts below show the number of native speakers of different languages in Canada in 1996, 2006, and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Directors and managers are mostly older people. Some people believe young people will become better leaders. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Buying things on the internet, such as books air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantage of shopping in this way weight the disadvantage