Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. ​ To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The issue of growing traffic and extensive pollution

due to

the massive amount of cars has become one of the crucial problems of our generation. Some

people

argue that raising the price of

petrol

is the solution. I partially agree with

this

approach, because the increment in price would certainly decrease the massive amount of cars in the cities. Regardless, there are some drawbacks as well which should be considered.

To begin

with, a rise in the

petrol

cost will decrease the number of vehicles

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around big cities.

People

will think twice before driving cars aimlessly, because of the expensive

petrol

,

thus

try to save their money.

For example

, some

people

do not own a car

due to

the rapidly increasing

petrol

price.

Moreover

, problems related to pollution will disappear, as the percentage of carbon dioxide released into the atmosphere goes down.

For instance

,

according to

some research, the majority of countries which are fighting air pollution, have a high scale of vehicles daily driven in those regions.

Therefore

, lowering the opportunity of an intensive

petrol

purchase could be a cure.

Nevertheless

, one of the disadvantages of

this

trend could be a dis approvement from the side of a crowd.

People

may get frustrated at the government,

thus

causing a risk of probable revolt.

For instance

, just a year ago

people

from Kazakhstan disapproved of the overestimated cost of

petrol

at gas stations, resulting in one of the huge rivets in most of the cities of the country. In conclusion, increasing the cost of

petrol

for the decrease of certain economical issues could be a good suggestion.

On the other hand

,

people

's opinions on

this

subject might differ hugely,

thus

leading to probable risks for the nation.

That is

why, the idea has to be analyzed throughout before bringing

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action.