Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. ​ To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The issue of growing traffic and extensive pollution

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the massive amount of cars has become one of the crucial problems of our generation. Some

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argue that raising the price of

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is the solution. I partially agree with

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approach, because the increment in price would certainly decrease the massive amount of cars in the cities. Regardless, there are some drawbacks as well which should be considered.

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with, a rise in the

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cost will decrease the number of vehicles

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around big cities.

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will think twice before driving cars aimlessly, because of the expensive

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,

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try to save their money.

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, some

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do not own a car

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the rapidly increasing

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price.

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, problems related to pollution will disappear, as the percentage of carbon dioxide released into the atmosphere goes down.

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,

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some research, the majority of countries which are fighting air pollution, have a high scale of vehicles daily driven in those regions.

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, lowering the opportunity of an intensive

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purchase could be a cure.

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, one of the disadvantages of

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trend could be a dis approvement from the side of a crowd.

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may get frustrated at the government,

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causing a risk of probable revolt.

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, just a year ago

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from Kazakhstan disapproved of the overestimated cost of

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at gas stations, resulting in one of the huge rivets in most of the cities of the country. In conclusion, increasing the cost of

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for the decrease of certain economical issues could be a good suggestion.

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,

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's opinions on

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subject might differ hugely,

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leading to probable risks for the nation.

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why, the idea has to be analyzed throughout before bringing

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action.