The diagram below shows a neighborhood before and after a mall was constructed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates a particular region before and after the plaza was constructed.
Overall
, there are massive changes on the left side of the maps so that, it was built a mall and parking area instead
of some nature area and stores. In addition
, the
number of residences has Correct article usage
a
destroyed
after the construction.
Add a missing verb
been destroyed
It is clear that
,
the number of houses declines marginally from 8 to 6 buildings after the construction. Half of the accommodation between Main St. and Oak St. was converted to parking lot space. Remove the comma
apply
Also
, there was not any change for the homes behind Oak St.
According to
the left side of the figure, there was a book store
and shoe store in the wood region which was changed into a huge bazaar. Correct your spelling
bookstore
Moreover
, there was the lake in the centre of the park
space that was turned into the parking lot zone.Change the verb form
parking
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