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Nowadays, there are a large number of coffee shops and fast-food vendors on high streets and in town centres. Why are there so many of these outlets? What effect is this having on the society?

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In
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a trend. Presently, there are a vast amount of cafés and
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 trucks found on the streets and in town centres.
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 situation and its effect on the
people
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. Nowadays, most
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people
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 lead a busy lifestyle. Because of
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 workload and the need to rush for everything, leaves the folks with little amount of break-times.
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 eventually leads them to consume street
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 which is easy to find and quick to eat.
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, a number of
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 drink coffee on a regular basis since
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caffeine helps them to stay energetic and focus more on their work.
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, police officers,
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 of the time are found to be consuming coffee and
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doughnuts
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 as they are not only delicious but are
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 quick to eat.
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, town centres are places where most of the citizens like to spend their free time and
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 they would naturally be attracted to
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 vendors after long walks.
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 there are
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 of effects of
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 trend on
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people
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, the major issue is health problems.
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, the
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 found on
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the streets
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 is usually to be oily and
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 includes
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 proportion of fat. Most of the working sectors include their employees
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 in a chair and
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 for hours
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 leading them to a sedentary lifestyle. It results in folks developing obesity
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 cholesterol issues.
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,
people
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 who have coffee in large proportion tend to form a disrupted sleep cycle and other problems.
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, studies suggest that consuming
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 amount of caffeine can lead to
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 in anxiety symptoms.
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people
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 to develop the need to eat something easy and convenient to find.
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, it results in them forming various health issues like obesity and anxiety.
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