The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makes comparisons where relevent.
This
horizontal bar chart shows a comparison of weekly household expenses in an unknown country in 1968 and 2018. The average cost of families was distinquished
into 8 different categories and Correct your spelling
distinguished
present
in values of percentage. Replace the word
presented
Overall
, this
can be easily observed that the expense of food
was Correct article usage
the highgest
highgest
in 1968 and the cost Correct your spelling
highest
on
leisure takes the lead in 2018 and the average spending on fuel and power is lowest both in two years.
Change preposition
of
Firstly
, it is noticable
that in 1968 the expenses Correct your spelling
noticeable
notable
of
housing, wearing and recreation were almost the same which Change preposition
for
are
close to 10%. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
However
in 2018, the Add a comma
,However
spendings
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spending
of
housing and leisure have raised around 10%.
Change preposition
on
Furthurmore
, the costs of household goods Correct your spelling
Furthermore
of
both two years kept the same about 8%. Change preposition
for
This
chart also
indicates that except food
,housing,transport and leisure, the rest items are never above 10%.
In conclusion, the Change preposition
for food
addition
expense of Replace the word
additional
food
and housing plays a significant portion of total weekly spending and this
also
shows the inclined trend of food
expenses.Submitted by leo3452811 on
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