The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.
These statistics illustrate the number of
sales
at the mini restaurant in the inner-city business region in the particular week of October.
Overall
, the owner of a restaurant earned more money at dinner hour than at lunchtime. Moreover
, on Friday they had the highest income in that period of time.
According to
this
status, there was the lowest revenue on Sunday by 1550$. In contrast
of
that, the maximum of Change preposition
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sales
was on Wednesday by roughly 2600$. The amount of income on the Monday
, Tuesday and Thursday was approximately 2400$. The number of Change the article
Monday
a Monday
sales
on the saturday
stood at less than 2000$.
Change the capitalization
Saturday
It is clear that
, at the
dinner time, the highest revenue was on Correct article usage
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the
Friday by almost 4400$. Correct article usage
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Due to
this
data, Saturday and Sunday were the lowest sales
in the period mentioned by 2900 and 2450$, respectively. On the Monday
, Tuesday, Wednesday and Thursday, the sum of income did not exceed Change the article
Monday
a Monday
from
3850$.Change preposition
apply
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