The diagram below shows process for recycling platic bottles
The diagram provides information about the recycling procedure for garbage
plastic
bottles
.
Overall
, the procedure contains 5 stages of operation, starting from collecting the plastic
bottles
and ending to make the new products.
In the first stage, the garbage trucks get garbage (including plastic
bottles
) from trash cans that are used by people. After that, they deliver them to the recycling centre. In the centre, human workers filter the bottles
that meet the criteria of the recycling process out of other useless garbages. Next,
those valid bottles
go to the compressor which makes them compressed into separate blocks.
Following
this
, the pair of crushers crush the blocks into pieces of bottles
. Onward, the pieces are washed and sent to the machine that produces plastic
pellets from the pieces. Later those pellets are getting heated to form the pellets into the raw material. Finally
, the raw material is ready for manufacturing many new products, including clothes, pens, and other plastic
-made goods.Submitted by firsturdiev on
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