The table below shows personal saving as a percentage of personal income for selected countries in 1970, 1990 and 2010
The given table chart illustrates individual savings as a proportion of personal income in 7
countries
in 1970,1990 and 2000.
Overall
,as the graph shows the highest percentage was in Italy throughout the period.The minor one was in Canada after 30 years
.We can also
notice that all the countries
' savings decreased,except for the UK.
From the period of 1970 and 1990 only Canada rose to 5.9% while
other countries
represented a decrease. Germany showed the same results -13.8% during this
period.Italy outlined the biggest proportion for the whole 30 years
dropped by 11.9% from 29.5 to 17.6.,Meanwhile both UK and USA sketched out a slight decrease,but Japan and France dropped with high percentages with almost the same results 6.2 and 6.4.
Next 10 years
, personal savings in Canada had a big decrease from 11.5 to 1.9%. Countries
such
as France,Japan and the UK increased gradually,while
the rest of the part denoted slight decreases over 10 years
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