A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money,either to sponsor a local children's sports team for two years,or to pay for two open concerts.It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter .describe the benefits of sponsoring the the sports team .summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts .say how you think the company should spend the money

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
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letter with a suggestion regarding your decision of investing capital in our neighbourhood. Since there are interschool competitions coming in a couple of months, having our football team adopted by you will uplift our community considerably. The competition is going to take place in
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city only, so if you support the team, it will be an inexpensive advertisement for your business as well because sign boards for all the partners are going to be displayed on the team jerseys. Contradictory to
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, if you decide to contribute funds for two open concerts, residents would love that experience as well.
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, it will assist our local singers if you let them play instruments and sing in these concerts.
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concert could be done at the local community centre.
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some people may decide in favour of concerts thinking them to be more fun, that excitement will only be for one night.
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, vouching in for the players will aid many youngsters altogether
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of only a couple of singers. I hope you give serious consideration to my opinion. Yours sincerely, Adam James

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