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The
two
 given maps present an existing plan and a future plan regarding the transformation of the gallery. Thoroughly, the sports building consisting of
the
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five small rooms will be turned into five big areas, including
two
 additional spaces in the
west
. Looking into detail, the entrance, located on the east side of the temporary
exhibition
 area, will be closed. Meanwhile, the lobby and the office, located in the same place, will be transformed into an educational
space
 and a
store
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 plant.
Similarly
, the
two
 apartments (temporary
exhibition
space
) located in the middle of the sports building, will be uninstalled.
Moreover
, the third chamber, the permanent
exhibition
space
, will be extended until the
west
 side of the education area and the store plant room. In the north of the building heart and in the south of Parkinson Court, an entrance will be installed.
Furthermore
, in the
west
, the
not-part
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 of the existing gallery stood will be switched into
two
 different places: the first will be an
exhibition
 store, located on the northwest side of the building core,
while
the
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another one is a special
exhibition
space
, located south of it and in the
west
 of the building midpoint.
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