The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
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The given picture illustrates the
process
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of implementing geothermal energy to generate
electricity
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. It is noticeable that there are five stages in delivering
electricity
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from the geothermal power plant. The
process
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begins with providing cold
water
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and pumping it down into the land
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and ends with a generator producing
electricity
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. Looking at the
electricity
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supply
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in detail, cold
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must be pumped down into the soil over 4.5
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until it is reached the injection well. If the cold
water
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has already been in the injection well, the next
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is through the geothermal zone, which consists of what can be called as hot rocks. When the
water
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becomes hot, it goes through the production well before being pumped up to the condenser. In the fourth step of the
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, the hot
water
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in the condenser is steamed and processed at the turbine.
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, in the final step,
electricity
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is produced by the generator, which is powered by the turbine.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • geothermal energy
  • generate electricity
  • diagram
  • volcano
  • magma reservoirs
  • deep underground
  • heat
  • steam
  • geothermal plant
  • turbine
  • condensed
  • pumped back
  • underground reservoirs
  • transmitted
  • power grid
  • distribution
  • continuous
  • renewable
  • volcanic activity
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