It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In
this
modern society, it is a common belief that living in a Linking Words
city
is more convenient Use synonyms
while
others argue that the best Linking Words
life
is in the Use synonyms
countryside
. In my point of view, I consider that the suburbs are the greatest place to live in.
On the one hand, living in the Use synonyms
countryside
reduces the risk of suffering from some Use synonyms
health
problems. It means that since towns do not have any industrial zone and the villagers are not preferred petrol means of transport, there is less carbon dioxide than in the Use synonyms
city
and the atmosphere is Use synonyms
also
fresher. Linking Words
As a result
, Linking Words
people
from urban would not contract any breathing problems. Research from Bach Khoa University in Vietnam has shown that Use synonyms
people
who live in the Use synonyms
countryside
tend to have Use synonyms
a
longer Correct article usage
apply
life
than citizens. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, everyone can a cheaper price for everything they buy in the Linking Words
countryside
. Use synonyms
Due to
the fact that a large number of food and Linking Words
stuffs
here are hand-made and not exported from other countries, Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
people
can have loads of quality groceries Use synonyms
with
Change preposition
at
a
half or even three times Correct article usage
apply
prices
than in Correct article usage
the prices
Use synonyms
city
. Add an article
the city
Thus
, Linking Words
people
can save their money and protect their Use synonyms
health
Use synonyms
while
living in the country.
Linking Words
On the other hand
, part of guys Linking Words
are
into Change the verb form
is
city
Use synonyms
life
as it can apply the convenience's facilities in daily Use synonyms
life
. Use synonyms
For example
, residents can easily move everywhere at every time they want with the help of taxis, grab or some types of public transport. Linking Words
Next,
there are so many places of entertainment in big cities like shopping malls, cinemas, or clubs for Linking Words
people
to spend their time with Use synonyms
there
family or friends. One another benefit Correct your spelling
their
from
Change preposition
of
this
big Linking Words
city
is that it provides many Use synonyms
oppotunities
Correct your spelling
opportunities
of
job applicants for Change preposition
for
the
graduates from investors, Correct article usage
apply
entrepeneurs
and factories. Correct your spelling
entrepreneurs
For instance
, a student can easily get a part-time job in every company in his field to earn a living and gain more experience for future work. All in all, big cities are the best choice for one's personal and career development.
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Last
, I strongly believe that rural Linking Words
life
is better. Use synonyms
Besides
saving Linking Words
people
's budget and physical Use synonyms
health
, villagers can get a happier Use synonyms
life
Use synonyms
in
there with a peaceful atmosphere and helpful Change preposition
apply
neighborhoods
, escape from stressful busy Change the spelling
neighbourhoods
life
and Use synonyms
healing
themselves.
In conclusion, Wrong verb form
heal
while
both village and Linking Words
city
has Use synonyms
its
own advantages, I Correct pronoun usage
their
Correct your spelling
still
sill
prefer Correct your spelling
still
life
in rural areas to have more Use synonyms
health
and economic benefitsUse synonyms
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