In many countries today, crime novels and TV crimes drams are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV show are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas

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and
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fully criminality always begin
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amongst humans
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if there are full attracts viewers to make them
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watch
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shows or
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in several countries
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various criminals in
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the
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feel about the killing . In
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stop making
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make parents control there are many ways to find ways to
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watching
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movies
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survey shows many parents do not like their teenagers watching
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for
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humans . In my view , I believe that
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novels
if any store or
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they have to take action for them .
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