Many children these days have their own mobile phones what are the advantage and disadvantage of it.

It is an irrefutable fact that a large number of juveniles nowadays have their own cell phones.
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it is not a trend without drawbacks.Both the benefits and darker side of
this
existence would be discussed in the subsequent paragraphs. To commence with,there are many benefits of
this
trend.First and foremost ,the pupils can complete their
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in
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effective and efficient manner.They can take
help
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of
internet
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to acquire any information regarding any topic.To cite an example,when students get homework from the school to write an article on
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personality
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the internet to get
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information about
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important
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.Another advantage,they can showcase their talent to
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other people.They can make
their
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videos of dancing , singing and so on.
Moreover
,with the help of mobile
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phone
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they can post their videos on
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different sites
such
as
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instgram
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Instagram
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and so on.
On the contrary
,
this
trend has certain negative shades.They are always busy
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their cell phones which can
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a bad impact on the eyes.
For example
,when juveniles play games for longer duration it can have a negative impact on the
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health
as well as
on the eyes.They neglect
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the other important activities which
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important for
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overall
development.
Apart from
this
,they lack behind in
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which can affect their future.They can not get the comforts of their life.They have to depend on the others for fulfilment of their needs.
To conclude
,mobile phone is helpful to get information and
also
help to showcase their talent to other individuals.
However
,
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cell phone has
harmful
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effect on the eyes and can spoil the
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future because most of
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children
are busy
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playing games.
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logical ,rational and balanced approach is required to solve
this
.

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