The table below shows daily oil production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004.
The table illustrates daily
oil
generation
in 4 particular countries
from 2000 to 2004.
Overall
,Congo was the leading producer of oil
per day
during the five-years
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five years
while
Chad had the least amount of oil
production per day
over the same period.Meanwhile,Congo had a downtrend in oil
generation
over time,while
other countries
were true in the opposite trend.
Congo was the top of the oil
generation
countries
in 2000 with 275000 barrels
per day
,while
it decreased over five years as the result with 203000 barrels
per day
in 2004.Besides
that,Nigeria was the second country in oil
generation
compared to other countries
with 205000 in 2000.Additionally
,Nigeria decreased from 2000 but 2002 was a turning point it had growth in 2003 and 2004,and become the top oil
-producing country in 2004.
Chad was the unique country in these four countries
because its daily oil
generation
was 0 from 2000 to 2002.However
,it started increasing in 2003 and had 50000 barrels
production of oil
per day
in2004.Finally
,Somalia was also
on an upward trend with 5000 barrels
per day
in 2000 and growth to 50000 barrels
per day
over 5 years.Submitted by goeyqihang on
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