In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Nowadays, in many countries, some children are often told that if they

motivated

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enough, they could receive anything they want. The argument that they can achieve their goals just by

try

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hard both

have

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many advantages and disadvantages.

Following

this

look, some positive and negative effects will be shared.

Firstly

,

this

message can give the kids many motivations to inspire themselves.

For instance

, Jack Ma-a billionaire

comes

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from

USA

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is an excellent example. When he was a tiny tot, he was tough

this

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opinion, so he motivated and searched for the results of his problems by himself, gained many experiences and became successful. In fact, we cannot refute that

this

point of view

increase

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children’s independence speedy.

Thus

, the merits of

this

opinion are easy to support

On the other hand

, many negative aspects can easily be seen in modern life.

For example

,

according to

a study, the number of children

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the primary purpose of their parent’s statement

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dominant

in contrast

with the rest.

Consequently

, kids just try hard in an unsuitable way with their targets, so they cannot enjoy the fruits of their hard work and become disappointed.

Furthermore

, there will be no results for their

inspirations

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, some of them have hectic schedules but

finally

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just waste their time.

Thus

, the argument that there are no risks to

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the

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children with

this

statement can be debunked. To summarize, there are many benefits and negative aspects

go

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along with

this

point of view.

However

,

it is clear that

the profits are easily seen, similar to the drawbacks. It is predicted that

this

message can be tough

on

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in

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the correct way in the

not too far

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future.