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Nowadays, some people believe that fashion is very important for youngsters and it has negative impact on the people and society. Do you agree or disagree with statement?

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In the
last
 decades, fashion has become crucial for teenagers and even children.
However
, one school of thought suggests that it is a negative trend and it impacts negatively on the people and the whole of society. Personally, I fully agree with the statement and in the essay proofs and examples will be given to support the idea. First of all, the trend industry requires a dozen of money
due to
 the fact that bunk things and goods that are claimed as trendy are overpriced. Youngsters usually do not have a budget to afford fashionable clothing and outfits and end up going into debt or even stealing money from their parents.
This
 happens because in a fashion company, a child that does not cloth trendy can be kicked out.  Cloth from popular brands, like Adidas, Nike or Puma sometimes cost a fortune,
while
 from not well-known companies or even cloth without a brand have much less price.
For example
, a t-shirt from a luxury brand and from a no-name author may cost 50 dollars and 5 dollars respectively, even thou the material is the same
Also
, in the worst examples, a teen may end up being obsessed with fashion.
This
 addiction can lead to splashing all money around on anything, consulting in
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inability
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rent.
This
 problem can
also
 lead to
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 and fighting others, who are not trendy.
To conclude
, the trend industry has engulfed society a lot and especially the younger generation.
This
 business has a number of drawbacks for people, like addictions or
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everything
that is
 trendy. As I see it, the industry can not be fully banned and prohibited,
nevertheless
, it should be reduced and restricted.
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