The table shows information about metro systems in six different cities.
The table illustrates the information about public transportation and compares six different metro systems which are located
in
3 different Continents , Asia , Europe and North America.
New York City Change preposition
on
subway
has a total of 24 lines
which is the highest number of lines
in
the list with a distance covered of around 659 Change preposition
on
miles
and annual journeys being at 1.65 billion
with 2.50$ a single ticket
. Followed by the second largest Subway
system in the list located in Beijing, China with 19 lines
covering a length of 357 miles
and per ticket
costing around 0.45$ and the largest number of annual journeys up to 3.6 billion
passengers. ,However
We can see that the Paris metro has 16 which cover a distance of 127 Add a comma
,However
miles
with a ticket
being around $2.30. London's tube has 11 lines
which cover around 249 miles
with 1.2 billion
journey
with a single Change to a plural noun
journeys
ticket
costing $7.30 the most expensive ticket
in the whole list. However
, Mexico City metro has 12 lines
which cover an area of 140 miles
with a cost of $0.23 per ticket
. Mexico's subway
is least
expensive which can save a lot of money with 1.6 Correct article usage
the least
billion
travelers
. Tokyo's Change the spelling
travellers
Subway
has 13 lines
with a distance covered up to 189 miles
and 3.1 billion
people travel with tickets being at $1.64.Submitted by yashrrajput46 on
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