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some schools have restricted the use of mobile phones. Is this a positive development or a negative one?

#schools #phones #development
Nowadays, most
students
 take their mobile
phones
 with them to school. It is a fact that smartphones are handy for several things and can make the student's life easier,
whereas
 it may badly impact their academic performance. On top of that, it
also
 limits the
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 social interaction, which is not good.
That is
 the reason why I believe that restricting
phone
 use in
schools
 is a good decision. Limiting
phone
 use in
schools
 will improve the learning quality of pupils. The student will be less distracted
with
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 notifications on their
phones
, which will make them more focused on what they are studying. It is scientifically proven that when you check your
phone
, you will be needing a long time to concentrate again on what you were doing. That will result in
a
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poor focus and a bad understanding of the subject they are having
lesson
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 on, passing exams with
such
issue
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issues
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 will be very challenging. So
that is
 why
phone
 restriction will be a good solution to reduce distractions during
the
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class time.
On the other hand
,
phone
restriction
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 may
also
 help the
students
 to have a better social life. When
students
 are scrolling
in
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 their
phones
 they mostly neglect the
persons
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 around them or even do not notice them,
due to
 that they will have no social interaction,
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 will
also
 be hard to build relationships with
the
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others. That will affect the
students
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student's
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 daily lives, because they may end up lonely with no friendships, which may lead to depression in the end. So controlling
the
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phone
 use may prevent unaware scholars from ending up in a bad way. Smartphone usage in
schools
 has many consequences,
for instance
, bad development. That can be avoided by taking action and
adapting
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 a manner that can keep
students
 away from their
phone
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phones
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. Unless the
schools
 can control the time spent on
phones
, scholars will have to put more energy
succeeding
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into succeeding
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 in their academic lives.
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