The chart below show the result of a survey of adult education. The fist chart shows the reasons why adult decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.

The chart below show the result of a survey of adult education. The fist chart shows the reasons why adult decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.
The graphs below illustrate the result of a survey of
adult
education.The first chart is about the causes of the decision to gain knowledge.The pie chart sketches out people's considerations for the costs of each
course
should be shared.
Overall
,the major reason for studying as an
adult
is the interest in the subject and the main cost of
course
has to be paid by an individual.The minor reason for studying is to meet people. Most parts of the proportion are
due to
be keen on the subject(40%) and to gain qualifications (38%)differing by 2%.The
adult
society who chose the cause - helpful for current type of employment represented 22% respectively.Both reasons :to improve prospects of promotion and enjoy learning and studying gave the same result - 20%.Only meeting people in studies of
adult
education showed 9%. By the survey, most part of the
course
should be shared by an individual - 40%. Employers have to pay 35 per cent of the cost of the total
course
, and taxpayers should share 25%.
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