You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • say why he/she would not enjoy going to college  explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her • suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

Dear Jonathan, Hope
this
letter finds you in the the greatest of health. My name is John, and I am writing in regard to express my happiness about your most recent concert in Dublin. I went there with my friends. I would say your performance was amazing. Your back-to-back songs electrified the whole environment. All the crowd over there was cheering and enjoying. I and my friends loved your performance very much. I
also
have a very keen interest in music.
Although
I chose to play the piano
first,
your passion for playing the guitar changed my mind when I saw you performing at a live concert. Since that day I have been practicing it with my music teacher. It would be a lot to ask if you can provide me with some lessons on playing the guitar. Actually, there is an upcoming concert at my school, and I am planning to perform there. Even though I can play the guitar, I face difficulties with some melodies.
Therefore
, your lessons would be of great help. Hoping to get a positive response.
Your
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sincerely, John
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  • Real-world experience
  • Practical experience
  • Financial independence
  • On-the-job training
  • Student loan debt
  • Personal growth
  • Professional networking
  • Career development
  • Skilled workers
  • Job market
  • Career goals
  • Immediate income
  • Professional relationships
  • Market demand
  • Defining interests
  • Educational investments
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