Some children spend hours everyday on their smart phones. Why is this the case ? do you think this is a positive or a negative development ?
The
current world Change preposition
In the
due to
advancement
of science and technology, everything happens through Add an article
the advancement
the
smartphones. Correct article usage
apply
In
addition
adults Add a comma
,addition
as well as
kids pass time
typically through it. To my way of thinking various kids spend
hours online Correct pronoun usage
who spend
has
Correct subject-verb agreement
have
a
positive Correct article usage
apply
as well as
negative development
. Both the reasons and my view is elaborated further
.
One
the one hand, nowadays Correct your spelling
On
children’s
learn more on their Change noun form
children
cellphones
rather than physically. Correct your spelling
cell phones
Furthermore
, tremendous apps and websites are available in
every Change preposition
on
smartphones
, Change to a singular noun
smartphone
children’s
could easily use and access it
. Correct pronoun usage
them
For example
, firstly
if a child feels to play , there are various gaming apps to play like lingo
, coco-mo , barbie and many more. Capitalize word
Lingo
Secondly
, if they like to watch cartoon
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cartoons
such
as sponge bob , peppa pig , jacky chan and so on. These video
can be seen Change the determiner
This video
These videos
in
Change preposition
on
the
youtube or either in Correct article usage
apply
the
Netflix. Correct article usage
apply
However
, not like old
days the current generation Correct article usage
the old
are
more adapted to technology. At the same Correct subject-verb agreement
is
time
, many children’s
school and classes are happening through
online Change preposition
apply
in
their smartphones. Generally speaking , after covid-19 whole world eventually adapted to online school. Change preposition
on
Due to
it kids can save their time
, focus and study at their comport
place.
Correct your spelling
comfort
On the other hand
, owing to hang around the phone for long
Change the article
a long
time
could elaborate adverse
. Change the adjective
adversely
To begin
with , they experience so many health problems later on in their life. For example
, our eyes get strain
by looking at the screen for Wrong verb form
strained
considerable
Add an article
a considerable
time
. Hence
, get
Wrong verb form
getting
migrane
known as a severe headache and Correct your spelling
migraine
eye sight
problems and so on Correct your spelling
eyesight
in
forthcoming.
In conclusion , Correct your spelling
is
children’s
disburse their time
on cellphones are
considered Correct subject-verb agreement
is
as
a factual Change preposition
apply
development
. Nevertheless
, to avoid adverse development
, its
better to limit their screen Correct your spelling
it's
time
. In my opinion , I think positive development
outweigh
negative Correct subject-verb agreement
outweighs
development
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