Some children spend hours everyday on their smart phones. Why is this the case ? do you think this is a positive or a negative development ?
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current world Change preposition
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due to
advancement
of science and technology, everything happens through Add an article
the advancement
the
smartphones. Correct article usage
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In
addition
adults Add a comma
,addition
as well as
kids pass time
typically through it. To my way of thinking various kids spend
hours online Correct pronoun usage
who spend
has
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have
a
positive Correct article usage
apply
as well as
negative development
. Both the reasons and my view is elaborated further
.
One
the one hand, nowadays Correct your spelling
On
children’s
learn more on their Change noun form
children
cellphones
rather than physically. Correct your spelling
cell phones
Furthermore
, tremendous apps and websites are available in
every Change preposition
on
smartphones
, Change to a singular noun
smartphone
children’s
could easily use and access it
. Correct pronoun usage
them
For example
, firstly
if a child feels to play , there are various gaming apps to play like lingo
, coco-mo , barbie and many more. Capitalize word
Lingo
Secondly
, if they like to watch cartoon
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cartoons
such
as sponge bob , peppa pig , jacky chan and so on. These video
can be seen Change the determiner
This video
These videos
in
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on
the
youtube or either in Correct article usage
apply
the
Netflix. Correct article usage
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However
, not like old
days the current generation Correct article usage
the old
are
more adapted to technology. At the same Correct subject-verb agreement
is
time
, many children’s
school and classes are happening through
online Change preposition
apply
in
their smartphones. Generally speaking , after covid-19 whole world eventually adapted to online school. Change preposition
on
Due to
it kids can save their time
, focus and study at their comport
place.
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comfort
On the other hand
, owing to hang around the phone for long
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a long
time
could elaborate adverse
. Change the adjective
adversely
To begin
with , they experience so many health problems later on in their life. For example
, our eyes get strain
by looking at the screen for Wrong verb form
strained
considerable
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a considerable
time
. Hence
, get
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getting
migrane
known as a severe headache and Correct your spelling
migraine
eye sight
problems and so on Correct your spelling
eyesight
in
forthcoming.
In conclusion , Correct your spelling
is
children’s
disburse their time
on cellphones are
considered Correct subject-verb agreement
is
as
a factual Change preposition
apply
development
. Nevertheless
, to avoid adverse development
, its
better to limit their screen Correct your spelling
it's
time
. In my opinion , I think positive development
outweigh
negative Correct subject-verb agreement
outweighs
development
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