In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefitsif society has more elderly people. To what extend do the advantegs of having an ageing peoplulation outweogh the disadvantages?

In numerous nations,
life
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expectancy of
people
are
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now longer than before. It is argued by some individuals that government
problems
are created by
elderly
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the elderly
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population. Meanwhile, other believes that there are advantages if society has more senior citizen. I believe that the positive impacts outweigh the drawbacks if a country has an ageing
citizen
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.
To begin
with, older
people
has
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have
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more
experiences
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experience
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in their fields. They
also
face a variety of
problems
in their
live
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either social or personal
problems
.
As a consequence
, they have wider perspectives on facing
problems
.
This
means that if government sectors
having
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elederly
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elderly
staffs
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, they can provide wise decisions to solve governments issues.
For example
, the
ministry
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Ministry
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of
finance
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Finance
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in Indonesia asked elderly
staffs
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staff
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to solve an economic crisis when a
resession
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recession
session
is
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happened
due to
covid-19 pandemic.
In addition
,
eventhough
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even though
elderly
people
in
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are in
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the stage of unproductive but they
also
still pay taxes. Most
eldery
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elderly
are
retirement
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retiring
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from their work;
however
, they are many ageing
people
starting their
business
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businesses
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after their retirement.
Thus
, they still get an income from their business,
it
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means they are still having
responsibility
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a responsibility
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to pay
tax
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taxes
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. The more ageing populations live the more taxes
government
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the government
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gain.
To sum up
,
eventhough
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even though
there is an issue when a country has many ageing
population
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populations
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,
but
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apply
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I personally believe that the
advanatges
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advantages
are greater.
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