deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world,with serious results for the environment. what do you think can be done to solve this problem?

All over the world human activities like logging has many detrimental effects
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the environment. In
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I illustrate several points to hit upon a solution.
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our natural surrounding
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a lot because
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we can live,
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and feed in order to survive. Many people do not use
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caused many problems
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as drought, acid rain, air pollution and so on. These are the drawbacks of deforestation and felling in order to make
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from them. One solution is to
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prevent
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or force them to make it less than before. Another key point is to aware all people
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the disadvantage of their
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in front of the environment.
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climate change and hard breathing because of
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numerous amount of carbon dioxide in the air. So, it would be
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big alarm for the entire world.
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about
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reclamation
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process and attempt to do so because
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logging. The population growth has made demand need of paper
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and flayers to
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the point.
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, more trees
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to be cut. Reclamation should be a special part of our life to save more energy and
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resources.
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grasses and
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again to the environment without any damage to the forests. In
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trees for human profits cause myriad bad effects but there are many solutions to do and save jungles.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Deforestation
  • Biodiversity
  • Afforestation
  • Reforestation
  • Sustainable/sustainability
  • Urbanization
  • Timber
  • Infrastructure
  • Indigenous populations
  • Climate change
  • Ecosystem services
  • Ecotourism
  • Biodegradable
  • Renewable resources
  • Carbon footprint
  • Conservation
  • Environmental degradation
  • Habitat destruction
  • Enforcement
  • Regulation
  • Awareness campaigns
  • Corporate responsibility
  • Supply chains
  • Illegal logging
  • Satellite monitoring
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