1.You have recently attended a job interview and have been offered the job. Write a letter to the company accepting the job offer, and provide details about when you will be able to start and any other information you think they may need.

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Dear Sir, I am delighted to inform you that I am accepting the position of Pastry chef at the

Hotel

Westin which was vacant recently. I would like you to know I would joining the position on 25/10/2023. As you know I am already selected and I am in my resignation period I have a few

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things to do at my current

Hotel

JW Marriott. My

last

working Date here will be 23/10/23 ,

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I have to do the clearance to get my experience letter which u need. ,

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I have to apply for my PF from the recent

hotel

as they need my signature,

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I have to hand over the paperwork to the new upcoming pastry chef. I would

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like to know when I have to do my medical and HACCP training, In ,addition I want to know at what time I have to report to the

hotel

along with

it when will be the induction. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, John

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1.You have recently attended a job interview and have been offered the job. Write a letter to the company accepting the job offer, and provide details about when you will be able to start and any other information you think they may need.

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