The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010.
The maps illustration changes the village of Stokeford between 1930 and 2010.
Overall
, in 1930 Stokeford was a rural area, but in 2010 it became more residential.
To the west of the central road, which runs from the bridge in the north to the south part of the village, shops and farmlands were removed and new houses were built instead
. Also
, two new roads were joined to the central street. The only building that did not undergo any changes was the post office.
To the east of the main ,street the village experienced even more development, which includes not only farm removal and the construction of new housing areas but also
the replacement of gardens and a Large house with a new retirement home. In addition
, the Primary school was expanded by adding two new wings. Besides
, two roads were added.Submitted by alexander.vectorgs on
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