The map below shows the village of Stokefort in 1930 and 2010.

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The maps illustrate changes in the village of Stokeford between 1930 and 2010.

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, in 1930 Stokeford was a rural area, but in 2010 it became more residential.

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to the west of the central road, which runs from the bridge in the north to the south part of the village, shops and farmlands were removed and new houses were built

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, two new ways were joined to the central street. The only building that did not undergo any changes was the post office.

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, to the east of the main ,street the village experienced even more development, which includes not only farm destruction and the construction of new housing areas but

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the replacement of gardens and a Large house with a new retirement home.

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, the Primary school was expanded by adding two new wings.

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, two roads were added. In conclusion, the area had changed a lot by the year 2010.

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The map below shows the village of Stokefort in 1930 and 2010.

The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, most people try to balance between work and other part of lives. Unfortunately, not many achieve this balance. What problems does this cause? Can you suggest some solutions to this issue?

Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solutions. What are the primary causes of the quality in life? What solutions can you suggest to improve the quality in life?